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VOL. 8, No. 35

 RAY DREYFACK/
HAROLD MELLIN, M.D.

 THE LIEUTENANT STRIKES
CHAPTER THREE FROM
"VOW OF VENGEANCE"
By Ray Dreyfack and Harold Mellin, M.D.

 EDITOR'S NOTE:
DARK CORRIDORS is proud to present a sample chapter from VOW OF VENGEANCE,
the new medical suspense novel written by our regular contributor RAY DREYFACK with co-author DR. HAROLD MELLIN. In this thriller, a group of physicians and their associates are gathering evidence of abuses and malfeasance by some of the nation's most powerful HMO's. In this chapter,
the head of Square Deal Health Options, most virulent of all HMO's, has
decided to eliminate one of the leaders of the fact-finding committee.
He has sent his most trusted aide, a twisted ex-cop known as The
Lieutenant, to do the necessary dirty work.

By RAY DREYFACK and HAROLD MELLIN, M.D.
for TheColumnists.com



It was a dark gray night. A rolling mist had gathered on Route 17’s approach to the Wurtsboro Hills on the outskirts of Monticello, New York. The Lieutenant kept the black Lincoln’s windows open for better visibility. The air was heavy, acrid, and turning chilly. Road conditions had been announced as hazardous. So much the better, he thought.

The Lincoln, “borrowed” for the gig from a midtown parking lot, paced the green late model Mercedes 50 yards ahead at a steady 58 miles per hour. For now, except for the two cars, the road was deserted. The Lieutenant was in no hurry. He was never in a hurry. He waited patiently for exactly the right time and place.

Up ahead in the Mercedes heart surgeon and cardiologist Dr. Arthur Edelstein was bone tired. The doctor and his family–wife Ruth and their girls eight and eleven–were off for a long weekend to a Catskill resort. With a heavy O.R. schedule, four days was the best he could manage. Next year he’d cut down. Or so he had announced to his brother-in-law David who said he’d believe it when he saw it.

“Are we almost there, Daddy?”

“Soon, baby, soon.”

It must have been the tenth time the eight-year-old had mewled out that question

“She’s such a pest,” the eleven-year-old observed.

“Hush,” Ruth Edelstein scolded. “Don’t be mean to your sister.”

“She’s mean to me.”

An exasperated long-suffering sigh.

“Daddeeee – "

“All right, that’s enough.”

A groaning, grumbling milk truck lumbered by in the opposite direction. The sound died to a whisper in the distance and the two cars were once again alone on the road. The air smelled smoky and damp.

The Lieutenant suddenly spotted a small scruffy-looking dog frozen in terror in the glare of the headlights. It suddenly darted out of harm’s way, but the Lieutenant was faster. With a twist of the wheel he felt the thud of the hit and heard the squealing death yelp of the animal. “Gotcha!” he chuckled.

He came alert now as familiar road signs caught his attention. He had traveled this route before. The exact stretch of road he sought was clear in his mind. His hands tightened on the wheel as the adrenalin began to pump. He could feel his blood rushing. The Lincoln hugged the road like a tank.

The Lieutenant loved the heavy car the way a professional sniper loves his telescopically fitted rifle. Lincolns and Caddys were his favorite weapons of choice. They could be picked up at will and were easy to dispose of when a gig was done.
Soon now. It was almost time to accelerate. To make sure of the timing he had done the trip the day before. The spot selected was no more than a mile or so up ahead. He pressed down harder on the gas pedal. Tough about the kids, he mused fleetingly. He had nothing against kids. But as the lawyers say, time was of the essence. Edelstein, after having broken his contract with Square Deal, was slated to perform yet another tricky high priced valve replacement on Tuesday. Square Deal had its own list of competent heart men. But for this specialized procedure the patient’s doctor had recommended Edelstein, sure to generate even more adverse publicity for the company. More important, the recklessly heroic surgeon was slated within weeks to testify at a Senate Hearing against Square Deal. That couldn’t be permitted to happen.

The man was a thorn in the Company’s side. Unless treated it could become an infection. An example had to be set. This gig should serve two purposes, the Lieutenant thought. It would not only get Edelstein out of their hair, but send a message to his fucking crusading brother-in-law David Green. That should keep McIntyre happy. “I want the busybody buttinskys boys dealt with,” he had said, “and I want it done before they make more trouble for us. I don’t want to know how it gets done; I just want it done.”

The Lieutenant had snapped him a smart military salute.

He felt a fine spray on his face. The mist was turning to rain. Weather conditions couldn’t have been more favorable for the job. The Lieutenant chuckled aloud. The Lord blesses sinners and perverts. He flashed a quick look behind him. Not another car in sight. The road was curving. Ah, there it was up ahead. The spot he had in mind. A deep rocky gorge on the right.

He turned on his brights as he edged the Lincoln closer to the Mercedes. The two cars were now almost abreast. He could see Edelstein’s and the kids’ heads turn in alarm as he pressed down hard on the horn. The big Lincoln moved closer. Closer, and closer still. Edelstein was twisting his head in an effort to see him but the brights blinded him. That was part of the plan. The Lincoln’s bumper, angled steadily to the right, a slanting battering ram. Bump, scrape, bump. The Mercedes was being forced to within inches of the guard rail. Closer. Closer still.

“Arthur!” His wife’s face was the shade of his grandmother’s white hair.
Sweat dripped from Edelstein’s forehead and was running down his back. Was the bastard trying to kill them? There was no escape to his left. “Oh my God!” he thought, as the insight suddenly hit him. The words Square Deal flashed through his mind.

Now, the Lieutenant thought. He turned the wheel sharply.

Ruth and the children were screaming. Their muffled screams pierced the night then faded into oblivion as the Mercedes plunged over the guardrail and down the steep rocky incline below.

The Lieutenant slowed up and glanced back. The smoke was already starting to mushroom.

A half mile ahead the Lieutenant found a break in the road. He made a U turn and headed back to the city, feeling a twinge of regret. He had nothing personal against Edelstein or his meddling brother-in-law David Green for that matter. But the fool had been warned to keep his nose out of their business. The dumb bastard didn’t know enough to listen. As His Fucking Highness always said, the business of business is business. Sometimes running a business is like running a war, and war has its casualties. The Lieutenant sighed, his sole concession to remorse.

He’d park the Lincoln on a street in The Bronx, and hop a cab to Scarsdale. Another job professionally accomplished. The hit had gone smoothly enough. There wasn’t a thing in the world that could connect him to Edelstein. Not a thing.

A fat bonus would be owed him for this one. It would more than pay for the deck on the house. Plus another bundle to salt away. In a year or two he could afford to retire. Enough was enough. The Lieutenant believed in the death penalty, even if he had to inflict it himself. But he was getting too old for this kind of shit.

He set the cruise control at 65. He and the Lincoln worked together like the crack professional team they were. They had one thing in common. The Lieutenant smiled at the thought. They were both killing machines.

"Vow of Vengeance" by Ray Dreyfack and Harold Mellin, MD, can most easily be ordered from Amazon.com, Iuniverse.com, or directly from the author (xraydrey@aol.com).

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