SHORT STORY FESTIVAL
RAY DREYFACK
Tom Turkey Season Is On...
and the Hunters Are Out In Force
By RAY DREYFACK
of TheColumnists.com
It was an hour before dawn and Josh, 11, was lost in dreams when he felt a hundred and thirty pound weight set down hard on his head.
Are you going or not?
Yeah, Im going.
His brother got off of him.
Josh leaped out of bed. Jeff, 15, had promised to take him turkey shooting. It wasnt just for the fun of it. They needed the birds. Rations were tight since Pa had passed.
Mama and Aunt Joyce were still asleep in their beds in the ramshackle gray house that had a BAIT AND TACKLE sign out front. Between school and whatnot the boys did their best to keep the business going.
They went downstairs to the kitchen and gulped down muffins slopped with yellow cheese and hot chocolates Jeff had prepared. Then they squirmed into boots, wiggled into gloves, slapped on their knitted orange hunter caps, and shrugged into heavy mackinaws. Jeff grabbed the 10-gauge shotgun and they were off.
A chill north wind whipped their faces when Jeff opened the door. Their mouths puffed like steam kettles. The sky was bleak with a somber hint of dawn filtering in. A pale gray mist shrouded the tall pines and firs.
Tom turkey season was in full swing. The boys climbed into the once blue 69 Ford pickup that offered small relief from the biting cold. Jeff slid behind the wheel and they headed out toward Grants Cove.
You cold? Jeff asked.
Naw.
Jeff smiled. Me neither. They exchanged grins.
An owl hooted.
At the Cove Jeff parked off the edge of the dirt road. They heard a shot in the distance, followed by another shot, the faint sound of a shout.
Joshs excitement was growing. Jeff had taught him to shoot and said he might let him try a tom or two on his own. When Pa was alive no one knew more about turkey shooting than he. Pa taught Jeff everything he knew, and Jeff taught Josh.
Jeff had reduced wild turkey shooting to an art. Half the art is locating the bird, which let off pent-up sexual steam by shock gobbling at the sound of an owls hoot, a crows caw, or a coyotes howl. Best locator call known, Jeff told him, is a crow call. You blow it hard and loud and youll get a turkey shock gobbling any day of the week.
When Jeff blew a crow caw not even the crows knew the difference. He showed Josh how, and Josh started getting it.
They scrambled over a low wire fence and trudged their way into the marsh. The ground was soggy in spots. They moved several yards through the weedy, scraggly growth. A chipmunk scooted by.
Look here, Jeff said. He pointed to fresh deer tracks. Maybe we can get us a doe.
Hey, wow!
Somewhere back off towards the road they thought they heard a car backfire.
Suddenly Jeff buckled down and collapsed onto the ground as if folded in half. He gazed up at Josh with green terror filled eyes. Then, just like that, the intelligence flicked out of them.
Josh was puzzled at first. Moments passed before comprehension set in.
It wasnt a backfire theyd heard.
Jeff lay stone still on the ground.
Josh stared down at his brother. Blood gurgled up through the mackinaw out of the hole in his chest.
Jesus, God! Josh started to tremble.
He stood there for several minutes staring down at his dead brother. Finally, his face set with resolution.Josh took the key to the pickup from Jeffs pocket and covered the body with a lot of branches and dirt to keep animals from getting at it.
Suddenly Josh was no longer Josh. He transformed into Jeff. Grabbing the shotgun, he moved on into the marsh.
"The best locator call is a crow call."
Josh tried it for sound. The croak was scrawny and weak. The second time it was stronger.
Sometimes a series of three or four caws works best.
Josh tried again and drew a gobble response.
It took him more than three hours to bag two bearded toms and a hen. He loaded them into the pickup and got behind the wheel. Josh was tall for his age. His foot just about reached the pedal.
Ma and Aunt Joyce were in the yard hanging clothes.
Wheres Jeff? Ma asked.
Hes dead. He was shot by a hunter.
Aunt Joyce looked at him hard. Is this some kind of joke?
Aint no joke.
Ma looked hard into his face and her terrified eyes opened wide. She started to moan, slowly at first, then it turned into a wail.
Oh my God! Aunt Joyce cried, and ran into the house.
Ma came down fast with one of her migraines so bad she had to gulp down medication and take to her bed.
Aunt Joyce called their brother on the telephone. Uncle Bob lived just down the road. His stomach was the size of a watermelon. He waddled into the house on the run. His first call was to Sheriff Glynn. The rail-thin cueball bald lawman appeared in 10 minutes. Aunt Joyce was back on the phone. Minutes later the house was crowded with neighbors, friends, relatives, and lawmen. Uncle Bob carted the toms to the pantry.
Gently and softly the sheriff started questioning Josh. What happened, son?
A hunters stray bullet got Jeff. His voice sounded flat and matter-of-fact.
Sheriff Glynn gave him a look.
Do you recall where this happened, where the body is?
Yes sir. Its down by the Cove.
You could take us back to the spot?
Yes sir.
Joshs voice displayed no feeling of any kind. People were looking at him funny.
Son, did you happen to notice the time when, uh, this occurred?
Right about dawn. We had just started out.
Sheriff Glynn frowned and glanced at his wrist. Did you understand my question, son?
Yes sir.
The frown deepened. The killing occurred at dawn, and you didnt rush back to report it?
No sir. I needed to shoot me some toms. Thats what we went out for.
Uncle Bob and a neighbor, Mr. Muhle, and others, exchanged puzzled looks. Amos Garner was shaking his head. He muttered to his wife out of earshot, Whats wrong with the kid. It dont seem to faze him none. If a brother of mine was killed . . .
Emma Garnet laid a hand on his arm. Hush, dear.
The sheriff sighed and blew out his cheeks. Lets go, son.
He and Josh and Uncle Bob climbed into the van. The sheriff took a deputy along with them. They drove out to the scene. The body was undisturbed. Sheriff Glynn and the deputy loaded Jeff into the vehicle.That night Josh was unable to sleep. The luminescent digital clock on the nightstand read 3:15. He felt a burning compulsion to talk. There was stuff he had to tell Ma.
The house was freezing. Josh wore flannel pajamas but the cold air sliced right through them. He slipped out of bed and slid into his slippers. He shuffled down the hall to Mas room.
Ma?
His mom didnt stir.
Ma?
Its cold, Josh, go back to bed.
Ma?
Go back to bed, Josh.
He hesitated. His mothers eyes were listless, more dead than alive.
Josh shuffled back to his room--to their room. The room they shared. He stared at the picture of Jeff that hung over his bed. Jeff had on a blue sweater with the red soccer letter he had won. His brother grinned down at him as if nothing had happened. Josh stood there several minutes staring hard at the picture.
Josh shook his head as if to clear it. He shuffled across the room and struck his head against the wall. He did it again and again with increasing velocity. His eyes were dry as sand baked in the scorching hot sun.
©2004 by Ray Dreyfack. The illustration is from IMSI's Master Clips Collection, 1895 Francisco Blvd. E., San Rafael, CA, 94901-5506, USA.
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